DETECTIVE STORY: By Mireia Alcántara, Arnau Fabró & Alejandro Fortes

CHARACTERS

Name: Alfredo Los Palotes Garcia

Partner: Rebecca Suligar

Description:

Alfredo is 34 years old.  He has obesity with a big illiteracy for his job. He likes saying that he was in Vietnam, but once Alfredo touched a gun, was to shoot him at the feet. Alfredo is very bad to fall in love with the women. He can say them nothing at the face.

Name: Rebecca Suligar

Partner: Alfredo Los Palotes Garcia

Description:

Rebecca hates her boss and she gets angry him while she's cleaning with the hoover. She is twenty years old, Rebecca doesn't care herself. She smokes and order fire and cigarettes to the people. Rebecca grew up in the street, she knows about fighting and marcial arts.

Name: Marc Agao

Description:

Marc is 44 years old. He works like a WC plunger. Marc is the habitual short man. He's in love with his job. Marc is a singleman and a good person. He loves crosswords, sudokus...

Death Cause: 

There was something in the food that provoked him a big constipation. Marc have died while he was shiting.

STORY

One normally day for Alfredo, when he was tiring on the armchair, eating ganchitos, watching TV with his loser football team -Athletic de Bilbao-. Suddenly, the telephone rang.

-Yes! Hello?

-Hello! I'm the Liamargao Detectives leader.

-Hey, guy! What happens?

-Good, magpie hamburgereater. My detectives and vagabonds of the budge weren't free, you have to solve a case that happened two days ago.

-Wow, guy!

-I've associated him the first silly that I've found in the street. He's award holder and allergic to...

-Yes, yes... When can I begin?

-You've to go to La pija gigante's restaurant, you'll smell there.

Alfredo and his partner -the award holder-, found the restaurant and said:

-Hello! Are you my partner or not?

-Yes, I'm. My name is Juan Carlos.

-What team do you like, guy?

-I'm of Athlético de Madrid.

-Of Athletic, of Athleti, the mother who...

Later of to know him better, they entered to the restaurant. Liamargao's detective gave him the report. They nosed to the toilet. The victim was there. He was sitting on the toilet with a magazine and a crossword without to be finished. he has died by constipation of all the food. We asked to the waiter, if they have put anything in the food. 

-The victim was with a man. The man wore a jacket and a beret that screened him the face. When the victim went to the toilet, the other person ran away. We aren't going to see him again-Said the waiter.

-Alright! It was a murderer. Well! It's going to be interesting-Added Alfredo-. Juan Carlos! Now, we have a case. Juan, Juan?

-Yes, I'm here!-Answered Juan.

-What are you doing? Why are you eating? Bring them! The cakes are for the detective, yummy! Blueberries, yummy, yummy, yummy!

Suddenly, Juan Carlos fell on the floor while he was making freak movements.

-What happens, guy? Take, take, the cake is for you!-Said Alfredo.

Alfredo put it inside the mouth and he did that he choke. Alfredo said that the weater was the guilty. After, Liamargao came.

-What happened here?-Asked Liamargao.

-I don't know, guy! He ate a blueberries cake and fell on the floor. Juan Carlos started to dance, lately foam has left  for his mouth. I've touched him with a strick to see if he said me anything, but he hasn't answered me.

-But you'll be useless! This man was allergic to the blueberries. Now! You'll look for your partner.

Alfredo went at home and gave a job to the first woman that he saw, the cleaning woman. The woman was called Rebecca Suligar. She was an ugly choni. Rebecca never cleaned the house, she only hurt to Alfredo, waking up him with the vacuum, threwing the clothes hanging  to him, giving him a shit at the toilet...

Well, they went again to criminal scene and started to search the proofs. After, they met them.

-I haven't found anything! And you?-Added Rebecca.

-I've found a receptacle with  constipation's venom . The tag is removed but it can see something in chinese. After, I went to the toilet and I watched in the crossword. He was a professional making those things. But here, it has lacked. It have to be written Germany, no Aquino Alao 13/14.-Thought Alfredo.

-This is an address. I've gone a lot to buy drug... potatos-Said Rebecca.

-We're going there and we'll ask what does it mean.

The both went to the street Aquino Alao 13/14 and asked to the neighbors.

-What does it mean?-Asked Alfredo.

   Chinese neighbor didn't say anything.

-What? What does it mean?

-Garimoto doesn't burnt-Answered Chinese neighbor.

-Let me! Kamitoya chumataya opendess?-Added Rebecca.

-Chomito Kamata Cho Jim Chima Comiye Apate Chon-Said Chinese neighbor.

-He said that they sell it in this place.

Rebecca and Alfredo entered in the flat.

-Hi! Is there anyone?-Asked Alfredo.

-Hey!-Said Chin Yono Hesió.

-Yes, we stay for the murderer case-Explained Alfredo.

-I haven't been it-Added Chin Yono Hesió.

The chinese man went out of his business without any cause, he shot. Rebecca tried to catch him in the streer, running in circles.

-Give him blothel, shoot!-Rebecca shouted.

Alfredo was shooting at everything have movement. He hurt to 34 chinese persons that walked there. Finally, the murderer gave up. Alfredo called to the police and the journalists while he was trying to call to the ambulance.

-What happened?- The journalists questioned him.

-Good... I found the murderer for my war, fight and intelligent talent.

Lately...

-You're an useful, you've killed a lot of persons that lived in this street. For the new case, I'll choose a dog to make of detective.

This is the story of Alfredo, Rebecca and others characters, their discoveriment and the murderer cases of the street.

NOTE: Alfredo keeps on sitting on the armchair while he was waiting for other case.

Ana, Belén, Mar, Aleix, Nur story.

In neighbourhood called Wolverhampton, three suspicious men moved there. Since they came, some kids in ages between 4 and 10 have disappeared. A gossip old lady called to his son, who was a policeman, and told him what was happened. He said that he will call to a famous detective-woman and his helper.

The detective was called Mary Brown, she was 42 years old and she was a widow. Her most famous case was when she discovered who have killed his husband and how. Her helper, Will Hatfield, was 37 and he was from Paris and single.

They went to the park in the afternoon and they saw a strange man walking the car, and two men watching him in a car. They saw three dogs following the car and they went to the car too. The detectives asked to inspect them. They said yes, because they thought that they weren’t going to inspect the car. When the detectives inspected the car, they found three bags in the trunk with three dead kids inside.

Rebeca and Dani history

BIG-SMAI

In July 10 a detective named Big-Smai moved to France, particularly in Paris. His biggest hobby was golf, I used to play on weekends weekend with friends. He had many hobbies, but the most important thing for him was to practice karate, that while she used to fend off enemies.

When I get home, she was surprised, because more than a house, a mansion, the best Paris mansion. He knew they would translate to this city, which was not expected, is that you do live in that huge field.

She unpacked the suitcases, clothes and keeps a change of clothes to begin their work. Before you begin to see the championship decided Catalonia, when he was called to a mission and had to drop everything to attend an auction of a Russian diamond. I picked up his car and headed for the place. It was either a diamond, was a valuable piece, which was not sold in any market, and which had been created in Russia, but now he was in France.

They wonder: How did the diamond from Russia to France? That was what I had to investigate, as it could bring this brilliant diamond, and for that we had to catch a flight and investigate that manufactures or place out exactly that great piece that at first glance does not have value, but seen from a criminal, maybe if you had a secret that could reveal much intrigue us.

I picked up the first private flight he could get, but what we did not know is that Big-Smai that diamond contained something that would destroy much of one of the many famous cities.

In the middle distance when the auction began, the detective heads to Russia in his private plane, where it lay quietly while enjoying the scenery. While the auctioneer sold object by object, when a man in a suit, a wealthy appearance with dark glasses and sunglasses that covered his eyes up and said to buy it for about 300 million plus price the auctioneer was going to relist. The auctioneer and cure gripped the diamond, to avoid leaving fingerprints and stain, and headed towards the good lord that before reaching him, halfway pressed a button causing a huge explosion in which all persons except it.

It was very strange that he and the diamond only be saved from such destruction, so the detective not only had to return to France to investigate the mysterious case of the entire city in minutes that he spoke, but there was no deduction for living, and that so he thought.

There was a witness who was going to that auction, but seeing as the auctioneer and gave the diamond to a man, went home, just as happened this great happened.

Detective change course and returned to Paris, landed, took a taxi and went to the police was able to take photos and draw conclusions that would remove others not because his intellect was one of the best in the world.

Tests looking around and found a piece of diamond. Do not know if it was planned, and placed the fake diamond purpose there, or if that was a key piece in their mission and bring it to the owner of such barbarity and so wickedly

Once tape-worm this stone in his hands was going towards a laboratory to investigate the footprints of the person who I activate the bomb, in two hours already tape-worm the samples of the fingerprints everything was aiming at a terrorist of Russian nationality, called Putofki. The detective I look in his papers of his previous missions and the terrorist Putofki already appeared in one of his missions, with the information that tape-worm and those that it could obtain located the site where it was living; rapidly it was towards there to take it and to put it between gratings.

When they came to the small house where it was lodging they entered and saw a few persons of the Russian mafia with armed pistols, he grabs and they started them interrogating on what had happened and where it might find the terrorist they did not say anything up to the end killed one of them and then they began to speak.

They said to them that the terrorist was in the central hotel to 2 km from the attempt. Directed there and in the elevator when we were rising to look for it is it was we start running and it went out running it was raised in a motorcycle and I escape then the detective was raised in another very similar motorcycle and it is the detective began the pursuit after 1 hour took the terrorist and I it take to the jail couple to do questions to him, not replay then they put him in the chair with electricity and put current up to four time that already could not more and then it started speaking said that he pressed the button which tape-worm a bomb to destroy all the individuals which were in the room, all that I arrange it the president of Russia to finish with all the corrupt persons who existed in Russia.

detective story Javi,Eric,Alex i Ainhoa

Detective story

This story went by in Paris, France.

The main actor is Connan, the Detective. He always went with his dog Michu.

Connan’s description: He’s tall. He has got black curly hair and glasses.  He always wears wide clothes and his shoes are black, he uses 49.5 of foot

Michu’s description: He has got brown short hair. He’s a greyhound dog     with black eyes and sharp pointed ears.

The story 

The detective Connan was contracted in Barcelona last Friday at quarter to six, when they met, they said him that he had to go to France because He has to investigate a drug trafficker. The police was looking for this drug trafficker for two years.

Next day the plane went to France at half past four, when he arrive to the airport a car picked him up and brought him at his hotel.

His room was small and dark and he hasn’t got space to put all the material that he needed.

Next day the detective went to de mail office because he has to pick up a box, when he came back, a boy pointed him with a gun and put him in a car, the boy that kidnapped him was the drug trafficker and he put the detective in a warehouse, he stayed there one day. The warehouse was small, smells bad and was dark.

The drug dealer began asking questions to Detective Connan, "Who was that?" "What were you doing in France?" but he did not answer, then the drug dealer made ​​a call and had to leave for an hour. At that time the detective was able to escape and when they got was running to escape and ran when he got to the hotel, but on the way he met a dog that would not stop barking and fear would follow him secretly took the hotel. When he reached his room made a call to Barcelona and told him what had happened, he explained that he had been kidnapped and had chances that the drug dealer was the characteristics he had, at that time Sánchez the dog barked again, hung up and was to reassure him. The detective was thinking of leaving the dog but in the end it was, to see if he was helping. He decided to call Mitchu.

The next day went in search of Costilla Sanchez, went to a neigh borhood where they had abandoned warehouses and found traces of drugs, were looking in every corner of the warehouse until they found the pass port, there saying your name, date of birth and where he lived. Detective Conan and his companion Mitchu took the passport, left the store and then watched as the drug dealer came, running hid behind a wall, Detective Connan and the dog waited till she was in the store soon after, Connan police called Barcelona and explained, quickly contacted the police in France and they sent agents to where the detective grabbed Connan and there Costilla Sánchez, but he had a gun and fired at a police started running and got into a car and went straight to the airport, which he did not know was that a police car was chasing him incognito and took him to the police, sent him.

Detective Michu

DETECTIVE STORY

The detective Michu, is a detective many very clumsy and very so silly I had a urine test and study the night before. This detective nobody knew as it did but always got what they asked. 

Once upon a time, a detective who lived in the neighborhood of Vallecas, Madrid and one case had to go to Swansea (Wales), England.

That case was one of the hardest he'd ever had. I tried that a billionaire businessman had lost their accounts where he deposited all his savings, and so went to Detective Michu, one of the best detectives in the world.

The detective that was so awkward, instead of going to Swansea took a flight to Norwich, and spent the whole day waiting for the billionaire until he realized that it was not but Norwich Swansea and immediately took a flight towards Swansea.

I get to Swansea from Barajas Airport (Madrid) and billionaire was waiting with a luxury limousine in Swansea Airport. Next, the billionaire Laudrup was presented to Detective Michu. Laudrup told the story that happened and for that fault lost their savings.

The next day the detective woke up in a five star hotel where you will stay for as long as is in Swansea,Laudrup then went to look for evidence to the bank where he had all his savings. The bank where their savings had Barclays Bank, one of the best banks for not the best in England. Detective Michu was directly talking to the bank manager and asked him about everything that happened with their savings. The director said he did not know anything about their lost savings and immediately went to look at your account to see if it was true all that he explained. The director looked at your account and yes, in your account there was any money when Laudrup had $ 150,000 in your account.

The detective said Michu angry he wanted his $ 150,000 Laudrup immediately that billionaire who was the president of the football team of Swansea City's needed to make the transfer and to pay all its players.

The bank manager refused to give the money because it was believed that he had lost their savings.

Michu angrily told him to give him the money or do not live out here, when suddenly pulls out a gun and scared the director gives you money. Michu happy, he goes to see Laudrup with money from the account and when you leave the office starts laughing, laughing so much that a person asked him, he did and he said the manager was so silly that no had realized that the gun was pointed at him and Chinese water.

When he saw Laudrup, he was very happy and I had enough money to do signings and have a better team.

Michu then said goodbye to Mr. Laudrup and Michu wanted to go to Madrid but as it was an awkward because he went to Barcelona where from that day remains to live there.

Day&Night

Detective story: Oriol Prat, Kilian Penelas, Patricia Ortega, Sara Rodriguez i Maria Rey

DAY AND NIGHT

It was seven o’ clock of morning. That day London woke up cloudy, the young detective John Drack, tall, red hair and elf ears was going to have breakfast when he read an amazing new in that day’s newspaper: “A young girl death body has appear at Baker Street with poker cards on it”. Nice! Another crime to solve! Thought Drack.

He went to the crime scene with his mini painted with UK’s flag, but before he left home, he put his sunglasses, as he never like his eyes, he has one green and another fluorescent yellow.

When he arrived at the crime scene, sent regards to the commander Prince and, in a row, he passed to inspect the scene.                                               

He found a girl surrounded in a puddle of blood. Approximately, she must be dead six hours ago. In first eyesight, he found the crime weapon: a poker card, exactly, the seven of hearts.

Then, he commented the case with the commander:

-How about that?  There is something new in the case?  We know anything about the girl?

- Look Mr. Drack, we discover that the girl is Jade, more known as Gigi Diamond.

-This is a prostitute’s name, no?

-You know, Mr Drack! -said ironically the commander-. Yes, she was a prostitute, but not a normal prostitute , she was a hight-class prostitute, with seven millions in a fiscal paradise.

-Seven? I think that I just saw that number somewhere… -said John, and quickly, he began to look for clues by the whole scene.

-That’s it! Here is it! The card that the killer uses to kill her is the seven of hearts! Maybe this isn’t a coincidence- said the detective- We should

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At ten o’clock at night, just after the news the most wanted murderess at this moment, The Crupier, walked throw the streets of Pinkerstone until she arrived to a luxury urbanization, where her next victim rest. After she concentrated and thought a plan to enter in the house unseen by the security cameras, she started her plan.

The victim lived with no-one and he didn’t had any cats or dogs, a advantage! Thought the murderess. The victim, a fifty years man, slept placidly in his bedroom.

When she took the card, the nine of diamonds, from her jacket pocket, she cut her arm and with a fast and sagacius movement she pressed the wound for didn’t stain of blood the crime scene and then she killed the man without compassion nailing the card on the man’s jugular.

********

Drack looked at his pocket watch from his dead father, with the inscriptions L.S.D, Leonard Samuel Drack. It is seven o’clock of morning, Drack always followed his routine, he never improvised. Another new death body, this time at Pinkerstone urbanization, a fifty years jeweler. John went to the crime scene exhausted… How it can be, if I sleep ten hours this night?, thought.

When he arrived he realized that it was a serial killer, because that victim was also killed with a poker card, but now it wasn’t the seven of heart, it was the nine of diamonds. Now the card was at the victim’s jugular. A little time after inspect the crime scene commandant Prince arrived and he brought the victim’s documents, it was a man, he was 55 years old and he was the owner of a very luxurious jewelry shop and he had more than 9 million dollar at the bank.

When Drack looks at the death body he found a tattoo on the victim’s arm, it was a joker.

-Prince, look that…-said nervously John-.

-Oh! It’s the same tattoo of the prostitute!

********

Another day came to the end and the Crupier went out again. Her next victim was Mdm. Bouvier, a multimillion widow that casually won the last lottery with that number: 50.731. When she arrived at the residence she did an elegant intrusion at Mdm. Bouvier’s house. Mdm. Bouvier lived with her maidservant, that today had free the night and with her cat, Dorothy.

The Crupier arrived to the principal bedroom and took from her pocket the ace of clovers. She went toward the victim and with a clean cut at the neck she makes eternal Mdm. Bouvier’s sleep.

The Crupier went to the exit but something stop her, it was the cat of the widow. With a kick she moved the cat and then she go outside the widow’s residence. But she didn’t realized about the metallic hit that sounds behind her. The cat looks at the assassin while she played with the watch that have fallen from The Crupier’s pocket…

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At first thing in the morning the phone rang at Drack’s home. It was the commander Prince. He had news of a new murder, now the victim was Mdm. Bouvier, and another time he was very tired…Why? I should go to visit the Dr- Repeat again and again.

When he arrived at the crime scene the commander Prince explained him the story of Mdm. Bouvier.  Mdm. Bouvier was kill with the same method of the jeweler and the prostitute, but now the card was the ace of clovers.

At that moment appeared the maidservant , she didn’t know anything about the widow, so when she knew the bad new she started to cry a lot, but then she had to ask the police’s questions.

After the interrogation Prince explained to Drack all the details about the case. The widow won the lottery last Monday and her cat would inherit all. Also her cat saw all so she would have a clue.

Drack entered at the house to look for clues, he found the death body of the widow with the same tattoo of the other victims, Drack continued looking for clues and behind a table he found a pocket-watch, it was…it was… It was his pocket-watch! The watch that had the inscriptions L.S.D!

 Drak understood all: He was the assassin… Did he was “The Croupier”? Did he was the woman who was wanted for police? (Doesn’t matter)

But now all made meaning, the victims, the weapons. The tattoo of the victims was the emblem of “The Joker” and a sect of compulsive gamblers. The sect who kill his father because he investigated it and discovered it crimes.

“I killed those people… I killed those people for REVENGE”

Drak wrote a note for the police, and put it on the diary of his father. Inside the diary there were all the details of the “The Joker” investigation.

Drak put the diary with the note on the table of his living room so  when Prince found him hanging, found also the solution of the case in which they work.

THE END

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